Review for Tears of Red and Gold
Tears of Red and Gold
(#) Circaea 2011-07-31 10:37:58 PM
Gods are very hard to write well as characters, but they do seem to fit into the Harry Potter universe. I look forward to seeing what else you do with this one!
I will be adding this one to my alerts. :)
One note: It isn't obvious whose perspective the story is being told from until several paragraphs in. This is trivially fixable.
I will be adding this one to my alerts. :)
One note: It isn't obvious whose perspective the story is being told from until several paragraphs in. This is trivially fixable.
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