Review for Taking a Mulligan
Taking a Mulligan
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-10-09 08:36:22 AM
Nice. Good story. Not enough fluff between Harry and Zhaan :-) Like the appearence of Stark at the end. He's very in character. I was wondering how Remus would be affected by the moon when he was no longer on earth. Nice solution.
If this is only going 4 chapters or so, there isn't going to be much after training. I hope you continue this for a while.
Thanks for writing.
Tom A.
If this is only going 4 chapters or so, there isn't going to be much after training. I hope you continue this for a while.
Thanks for writing.
Tom A.
Author's response
I'm contemplating an epilogue to tie up loose ends, but we'll have to see how it goes.
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