Nice. Good story. Not enough fluff between Harry and Zhaan :-) Like the appearence of Stark at the end. He's very in character. I was wondering how Remus would be affected by the moon when he was no longer on earth. Nice solution.
If this is only going 4 chapters or so, there isn't going to be much after training. I hope you continue this for a while.
Thanks for writing.
Tom A.
Author's response
I'm contemplating an epilogue to tie up loose ends, but we'll have to see how it goes.