So far, these vignettes are the best part about the story, because the plot is taking so long to materialize. But, if you rushed the plot, we'd miss all this awesome lesser-known-character development. The nice thing about fan-fiction is that there is no word limit, and I can carry 4000000 words on my iPhone as easily as I can carry 40000. This is good but dangerous. Connected with this is the fact that, for better AND worse, there is no Editor. No one to force you to cut that charming scene that doesn't move the plot forward fast enough to hit your page limit, but also no one to tell you to speed it up already. So I guess you have to rely on us. Well, my vote is to keep the current pace, and quality of writing. I LIKE slowly getting to know these characters, especially when they are as well written as they are in your story. Just my 2 cents (well, maybe more like 2000 cents... this comment has run on a bit...)
Author's response
Thank you!
One of the rules for myself that I'm trying to stick to is "This is not a novel." I feel a lot of pressure to make it seem like one, though -- mostly from myself -- even though my _intent_ is to fully exploit the freedom I have. (I think the closest analogy in terms of narrative structure might be a webcomic, but even then.)
I _really_ appreciate the feedback and reassurance!
Maybe I should put a note right at the very beginning -- "THIS IS NOT A NOVEL." :P
Again, thank you!