Cute. And really, you portrayed “the wizarding world” (sans Hermine
and Hedwig) exactly as I can gather they would react.
As for my opinion… thebooktheif[sic!] has already written it all ;)
If you’re a computer conslutant (not a typo…) try AO3 instead, FFN doesn’t work with Lynx and relies much too heavily on ECMAscript. Just a hint.