Review for Confessions of a Protective Older Brother
The biggest thing, though, is the lack of substance. You tell a good story, but it lacks depth. More description would help. Some of the sentences could be combined to form paragraphs. I think work in the form is definately needed.
Otherwise, I found this very much in line with the book and the movie. Thank you for sharing.
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