Review for Hiders

Hiders

(#) PartyPoison 2011-09-02

It’s not just you. It is very clear that you have come a long way from your first story. Actually it’s kind of miraculous to go back and see how much you have improved in everything you’ve done on this site.
Well it’s nice to know you will not be eaten by a shark and will keep reading my words. I never have liked sharks all that much.
Once again it’s a little upsetting to think that this story is almost finished. But on the up side that means you will have more time for your other stories. I am looking forward to see how this ends.