Well, what can I say to that chapter?!
You have outdone yourself! Just bloody brilliant!
Seriously, you need to try to get this published, with name changes of course. But it is that good! Trust me!
And are you MCR ing it soon? I saw their tour dates recently, and I am pretty sure they are in your neck of the woods very soon.
Have fun if that is the case! And get a publisher!
xo