Damn good. Would you be terribly POed if I C&Ped some of the best little bits, here and there? I do it with the best fanfics, and put them on a file in my Yahoo notebook. Along with my better half's great wizarding ideas. Separated of course... That case as an example, is genius. OK see ya on down the line...
Author's response
Nope -- I'd be flattered. Go ahead. As long as I stay safely pseudonymous, I don't really care what happens!
I am really enjoying having someone review so many chapters as they read, btw. You shouldn't feel pressured to do it just because you started, but I appreciate it!