Review for The Art of The Swing

The Art of The Swing

(#) JoeFenton 2006-10-12 10:26:39 AM

It was pretty good. I think the start was a little off, with Naoto saying swinging the bat was an art form, then going on to say how anyone could do it if they wanted to with a little effort. That's a contradiction - art is by definition something most people can never attain, no matter how they work at it.

After that, it settles down and goes pretty well. A little slow perhaps for some folk, but not bad. I like the mood the writing creates.

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