Review for The Demon that Lived

The Demon that Lived

(#) Ensoa 2011-09-20

An intresting start.

It's quite obvious you took a big part of the idea from the other fic of the same name wrote by...er Kolarthecool?

Anyway, the only part that I find bad, is that you mesured the knowledge, which, in my opinion is quite ridiculous. The other is the shitloadoflastnames, being heir to those families would be one thing, but as his full name, not so much.

Cheers!