Review for I have an idea for a story...

I have an idea for a story...

(#) Vengefulscout 2011-09-25

Name:Emily Toye
Age: whatever fits :)
Looks:long,brown hair, silver-blue eyes, pale, 5'4, no make up. Wears band tee's, jeans and converse most of the time.
Personality: shy, quiet, kind and caring but can get easily offended and will lash out at anyone who hurts her friends but cant stand up for herself.
Part: could i be Mikey's GF? If not, throw me anywhere, i dont mind!
Anything else: Likes to sing and play piano but not in front of other people, is afraid of knifes and fire and is interested in the paranormal e.g. ghosts

Hope thats all ok! Change anything you want if needed! Happy Story Writing!