Review for One Wizard Too Many

One Wizard Too Many

(#) Worldmaker 2011-09-27 02:11:19 AM

There are myriad ways to indicate a flashback, but none of them so ham-handed, awkward, and downright bad as just pushing the word "FLASHBACK" into your text.

Perhaps you should read more, to learn how real writers do it.

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