Review for Russet

Russet

(#) AnnePackrat 2006-10-12 08:43:11 PM

Nice description here. Only thing I'd improve would be to give a better idea of how much time has passed. I have trouble picturing how old Winry is here. 16? 20? Just a suggestion though. And dammit, why'd you have to have Den gone? I love Den!

Something tells me that one of those kittens is coming home with Al though.

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