Really good chapter!!
Great quidicht play. I like the changes in the story, way better, but is sad that Hermione have to be petrified so soon.
Neville is begining to be to full of himself, Dumbledore is really making a huge mistake and he will probably not notice it until is to late.
I really hope to read more soon.
Cheers.
MAC
Author's response
thanks... Quidditch is hard to write!