Review for Take me away

Take me away

(#) japulapu 2011-10-15

No! Please don't use RyRo! He's a doll, he really is. I positively love him and while we're at it, I also add that I love everyone in My Chem including Bob. But back to your story. I hope you don't use Ryan. Great story but there are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Run it through word to remove them. The sentence construction isn't great but the originality of the story makes up for it. You just need to get rid of these problens and this story will be on it's way to making Ficwad history.