I just started reading your story and so far it is OK. I like the fact that someone is expanding the HP universe. It worked well with Star Trek, Star Wars and other well written series. I will continue to read as I find it interesting and moving at just the right pace.
Author's response
Thank you!
I'm pretty pleased to see expansion of the universe listed as one of the notable features of the story -- _I_ think it is, but it's not something all that many reviewers have talked about explicitly.