Review for Wolf's Children
Wolf's Children
(#) Tarnisis 2011-10-24 04:25:07 PM
I saw some grammar mistakes, but no one is perfect, so I won't make a big deal of it.
All in all, pretty good so far. Keep writing, this story shows promise.
-Lyn Harkeran.
All in all, pretty good so far. Keep writing, this story shows promise.
-Lyn Harkeran.
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