Review for Auditions, and apology!

Auditions, and apology!

(#) MemoryWolf 2011-10-27

I kinda just wanted to try it out, it sucks quite a lot, but maybe when you read it some inspiration will come to you:P it's called, your heaven is my hell.

This place ,
Where wishes come true.
There's a spark of hope,
That rightfully belongs to you.

There's a thinking in my head,
When I see that spark,
Thinking that you'll share,
But it all ended in despair.

This blur of black and white mixed together to break our minds.
I see its in the city sky,
I see it's in the country side ,
It kills me to be here.

These broken hopes are forever repeated,
Trapped in jars,
The wounds never treated.

When water flow and clouds fly,
It means the world is never fair.

This place ,
Where wishes go wrong.
There's a spark of light,
That remains black and tainted.

This blur of black and white mixed together to break our minds.
It kills me to see it.

This place, 
A place where people whither away and are forgotten.
A place I love, a place you loathe.

This blur of black and white,
No lines and no path,
Just a light to guide,
And see where you'll end up.

Your heaven or my hell?
My heaven is your hell.