Review for The Fire Burns Red
I know a lot of stories are based on them defeating Cornus and some of them dieing,
but something about this story reminded me of my own,
or maybe not maybe I'm just being werid like always. Sad, very sad but very good,
the writing style reminds me of my friend,
Ok that was random,
The saddest stories are often the best, and it shows in this story,
I don't think you should add to it, it's fine as it is and it wouldn't have the same emotionel value if it was continued. Keep writing I love your stories.
You're not the main attraction, just an over-enthusiastic reaction on my part.
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While Goten, Gohan and Trunks were forced to train with Vegeta in the Gravity Chamber, Pan was left ...
In: Dragon Ball Z
They give her a new lease of life, now she owes them
Where do you want to go to? Heaven? Or maybe Hell? Make your choice.
It's our life. We make our own decisions and sometie our own path.