Review for Auditions!!!! :D
Auditions!!!! :D
(#) KelseyChem 2011-10-28 10:00:16 PM
OKAY I MESSAGED THIS TO FACEBOOK TO YOU BUT IMMA POST IT HERE CUZ IMMA DO WHAT I DAMN PLEASE.
ok so my idea for your story IS FUCKIN STUPID.
but anyways
so ryan is depressed cuz he gets his heart broken so he kills himself under an old oak tree and wakes up in the land of the dead and realizes death isnt as splendid as he thot so he makes a vow lyin under that tree that he'd wait for his true love to come set him free always waitin for someone to ask for her hand when outta the bluuuuue comes this groovy young man ! and so brenny bear goes into the forest *AND IDK WHAT HE SAYS YET* but he says something to free ryan and bind ryan to him but brenny is already getting married to someone else...AND YEAH THATS ALL I HAV SO FAR :P
CRAP IDEA, IM SORREH !
ok so my idea for your story IS FUCKIN STUPID.
but anyways
so ryan is depressed cuz he gets his heart broken so he kills himself under an old oak tree and wakes up in the land of the dead and realizes death isnt as splendid as he thot so he makes a vow lyin under that tree that he'd wait for his true love to come set him free always waitin for someone to ask for her hand when outta the bluuuuue comes this groovy young man ! and so brenny bear goes into the forest *AND IDK WHAT HE SAYS YET* but he says something to free ryan and bind ryan to him but brenny is already getting married to someone else...AND YEAH THATS ALL I HAV SO FAR :P
CRAP IDEA, IM SORREH !
Author's response
WELL THEN GOOD SIR...but here's what I have-
Bren and Ryan are seeing each other secretly, cuz Brendon's parents don't approve (rich, strictly mormon, you get the idea). Brenny is about to elope with Ry, but somebody kills Ry under the oak tree in front of Brendon's eyes. He doesn't see the murderer. Aaaaand the rest is a surprise! SO WAIT. jeeezus
Bren and Ryan are seeing each other secretly, cuz Brendon's parents don't approve (rich, strictly mormon, you get the idea). Brenny is about to elope with Ry, but somebody kills Ry under the oak tree in front of Brendon's eyes. He doesn't see the murderer. Aaaaand the rest is a surprise! SO WAIT. jeeezus
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