You wrote this at the theater? That's strange. :) I wouldn't be able to do that lol.
However I wanted to review this to let you know that it is absolutely wonderful! AMAZING! I loved it.
I loved how you portrayed Frank's thoughts and then how it ended up being Frank who was high. Everything about this story was insanely amazing. This is probably my favorite MCR story ever. It was written beautifully.
I enjoyed the twist quite a lot.