Review for The First of Many
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-12 12:05:57 PM
and I wouldn't care if it was long, just if it was well
written. This is very well written. It almost kinda
scares me how well this is written and how well you
write in general. I like how Gerard acts like he doesn't know what happened because he's hoping to get Mikey to open up to him. I also like how I feel like I can hear Mikey's sobs and I can see Gerard rubbing Mikey's back. When I read your writing it feels like I'm there in the story and this is happening right before my eyes. Your writing provokes extremely strong imagery and emotion. I don't think I could ever dislike a thing about your stories and I don't think that I could dislike any of your stories at all. Sorry about any mistakes in any comments I've posted. I can type, really, but I do everything on my iPod and my thumbs are kinda big and it replaces things I don't want to be replaced and it's just terrible to write a comment on one of these things. The commas and aposthrophes are my fault. I only know about nouns and things, not where apostophes belong.
After batteling the dementors at the end of his third year at Hogwart's, Harry notices himself going...
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A lament, to what was. *Rated R for language*
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