Review for Nom Nom Nom.

Nom Nom Nom.

(#) SatelliteHeart 2011-11-13 06:00:54 PM

Give us more fridgeration!

And right here, right now
All the way in Gourmet City
Obese children raise their filthy, meaty palms
Like sharp knives up to heaven

And all the kitchen halls and snack rats
Ask chefs made from food
And rotten garbage scream out "What will you feed us?"

I think that was the funniest part. And 'like sharp knives' made me think of 'The Sharpest Lives'.

This is funny.

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