Review for Maimed
Maimed
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-14 05:43:10 PM
I really like this. I think it's really good, and it's definitely not boring like some stories without dialogue could be. I like how Mikey seems like," I'm not a zombie, I'm not a human, but I must accept what I am whether it's a blessing or a curse." That sort of theme, I guess, kinda reminds me of a poem called " I Am What I Am. So What?" by Raquel Valle-Sentíes. I really like those kinds of themes when they're done right, and you did it wonderfully. I like this a lot also because I don't see a lot of stories that don't use much dialogue. You know you're a great writer when you do something that's not done so often, and you do it very well. I also like the description of the people he knew and how they probably mean a little more than they did before because they're not there for him to see and hear everyday. I also like the little Frikey. Good job.
Author's response
Thank you very much! I am soooo glad that you liked it! I couldn't help but splash a little bit of Frikey in there because it's my favourite pairing. Thanks for telling me that it's not boring; I've never done anything without dialogue before and I was terrified that it would be as dull as ditch water. Thank you sooo much for reviewing! :)
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