Review for Sinful FANtasies
(#) deliciouslysinful 2011-11-16 09:06:28 AM
Well, now we added our fantasy too. And we'll add more :)
We're not really expert at writing, but you could think about clearly marking the entries from Becca and Barbara in your story - you have two persons narrating... Now anybody reading may get a bit lost as to who is speaking... We did this in our fantasies, we already published one here so you can check it out too...
I'm sick of this heartbeat. [Poem type thing. Please read and review?]
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