Review for Sinful FANtasies
(#) deliciouslysinful 2011-11-16 09:06:28 AM
Well, now we added our fantasy too. And we'll add more :)
We're not really expert at writing, but you could think about clearly marking the entries from Becca and Barbara in your story - you have two persons narrating... Now anybody reading may get a bit lost as to who is speaking... We did this in our fantasies, we already published one here so you can check it out too...
Frank wants to bang Gerard up the butt,but Gerard won't let him.Warning: crying and erections.
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