SWEET JACKASSES EATING SUSHI UNDER SEX! That was so vivid. I could literally see it. And in real time that was probably nine or ten minutes. Damn; you got some writing skillz. (That beginning part of my review, that was my odd way of sayIng 'SWEET JESUS!' in case you didnt know...) Please update soon!
Author's response
Thank you very much! I'm loving your way of saying "SWEET JESUS", it made me smile! I'm pleased that you liked it! I'll update tonight (UK time). Thank you for taking the time to review! :)