Review for Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-28 03:48:57 PM
I'm glad that you liked and got when Mikey kept doubting/contradicting himself, that was the part that I was unsure about. I wanted to make it clear how lost he is and how low his self-esteem/confidence is.
I think I'm going to write the next chapter in Gerard's POV. I was torn between Frank and Gerard, but your review has settled it, so thanks for helping me to decide.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed and helpful review! :)
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