Review for AUDITIONS XX :D

AUDITIONS XX :D

(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2011-12-06

Part: Quiet and shy killjoy, please :)

Name: Tara Swordsmith

Killjoy Name: Cyanide Sunshine

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Personality: Tries to be strong in front of everyone, but is actually extremely insecure. She only talks when she absolutely has to through fear of giving people a reason to be mean to her. She is incredibly trustworthy and can keep a secret like a bank can keep money. She always does what she thinks is best, but can often be easily led due to her longing to help others. She always believes that she can do better and when things go wrong she's quick to blame herself. She has a good sense of humour, but doesn't laugh often unless with people she really trusts. She's always willing to help so people often take advantage of her. She's very naive, but is smarter than people give her credit for. Her silence can be either a gift or a curse; she's a good spy because of it, but will never say when something is wrong because she hates upsetting others. Deep down, she has a strong sense of will power and will always try her hardest at any task given to her. Especially when given to her by a good-looking guy. She falls in love way too easily, but never makes her feelings known. She would never hurt anyone and so struggles when attack/getting attacked by BL/ind. She feels guilt in high definition. She is very clumsy which only contributes to her shyness. She's a good friend to everyone who is patient enough to see past her shyness and is always willing to forgive.

Clothes: Fishnet tights with various rips in them due to her clumsiness; ankle-high red converse boots with one black lace and one black lace; a red tartan punk-style skirt with black netting underneath that's a few inches above the knee; a tight-fitting black t-shirt with a red sunshine shape on it.

Looks, split for details

Hair colour: Pale blonde with a red streak near the front.

Hair style: Very long and wavy, she uses it almost like a safety blanket to hide her from the world. Cannot be tamed.

Eye colour: Piercingly clear blue.

Skin tone: Pale, almost white.

Height: Quite tall for her age, often said to be the cause of her endless clumsiness.

Body size: Slim, but not to the point of being skinny.

Tattoos or piercings or anything else for looks : A red nose stud in her left nostril.

Voice (soft or rough or something): Extremely soft and quiet, so much so that she can be hard to understand unless you're used to her.

Likes: Listening to music, singing but never in front of anyone, reading tragic love stories, anyone who takes the time to look past her shyness.

Dislikes: Having to talk, being put under pressure, hurting anyone, her clumsiness, being shouted at, anyone who hurts her friends.

Fear: Being alone, the dark, getting bullied, letting down anyone, cats.

Anything else: Her big brother ran away with her during the 2012 catastrophy to save them from their abusive father. The survived the events of 2012, but never made it to a huge city because her brother recognized the dangers and repression that BL/ind would enforce. He tried to speak out and so was assinated. Tara ran into the desert, where she was found (half-starved and too terrified to talk) by a friendly group of killjoys.


Hope that was alright; good luck with the story, I'm sure that it'll be great no matter who you use! :)