Review for Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

Fate's Cruel if Life's Great

(#) tortillachip 2011-12-09 12:37:27 PM

It always makes me happy when I see that you've updated. I haven't been reading much fanfiction at all lately with school and whatnot but I always look forward to reading your stories. Anyway, this chapter is really great. I like how it was in Frank's point of view this time. The scene where Mr. C and Frank were talking was very interesting. It was interesting to see Frank talk about what happened because he's had to had enough strength for 3 people to get through the weekend and he didn't have anybody to ask him how that affected him. Everything happened so quickly and unexpected problems kept coming about and it must have affected him in some way. It was a good idea to show what he felt. I also like how this was a time for him to kind of get his thoughts together and to sort them out. Of course when he met Mikey he thought that no one as nice and shy and cute as Mikey should get bullied like Mikey does, but now he hates the kids at his school even more for driving Mikey to believe he's worthless. He's so undeserving of the treatment he recieves and Frank can't help but want to protect Mikey. Also, he knows what it's like to get beaten and to get hurt, but Mikey gets it far worse than Frank ever has. I also like Frank's need to determime what he feels for Gerard and Mikey. If he feels the need to try to put the correct feeling for each Way brother, then of course he is confused. That or he hasn't really had much time to think about that over the weekend. I'm not sure which one. I really liked the ending. It shows that Frank really cares about him and wants nothing but the best for him because he believes that's what he deserves. He wishes Mikey could believe it too. Well, this is beautiful and well written and I love everything about it. Great job, as always.

Author's response

Thank you very much; it's extremely uplifting that you look forward to reading what I write!
I'm really pleased that you liked this chapter, I kinda thought that Frank needed a bit of an outlet after his weekend. I think that Frank is quite confused at the moment about his feelings for Ways...
Thank you soooooooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely and detailed review; it really does mean a lot! :)

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