"the thumping of his heart that not so strangely resembled a bass line" wow. how appropriate.
i sit at a computer for hours trying to write lines like that. i'm thoroughly jealous and exceedingly captivated.
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thanks so much. that means a lot to both getup_n_go and myself. :) we spend a lotta time and energy on getting across the right emotions when we write our stuff. We're gonna update soon but we've both had real life get in the way for right now.