Review for Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-15 12:51:36 PM
Your interpretation is spot on; I was trying to get across how guilty Frank feels because he did have the chance to stop him, did kinda give him that final push. I'm relieved that you didn't think that it was confusing; that was my big worry with this chapter (well, with the majority of the chapters.).
I wasn't too sure about the note and I'm pleased that you thought it came across alright as that was something I really wanted to do well with in this chapter. I really wanted it to make people (both characters within the story and real-life readers) just stop and think; wow, this kid's in a really dark, really desperately desolate place mentally right now, he really needs his friends to pull him through. It's very nice of you to say that you thought that it was written well; thank you very much!
Yeah, the note did come out of the blue for Gerard as an extremely nasty shock, even nastier after he thought that his little brother was doing better with his help.
I know that my responses probably always sound the same; but I really do mean it when I say 'thank you', I really am truly grateful for you taking the time to leave such lovely, detailed reviews; they help me to move forwards with my writing.
Thank you very, very much or taking the time to leave such a detailed, kind review; you've made me smile! :)
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