This is brilliant. I really really like it. I wonder if Frank will ever tell Gerard about the kiss and about how he used to beat Mikey. Heehee exciting stuff! I can't wait for more. Update soon
Thank you very much; I'm really happy that you liked it! I'm relieved that you think it's exciting and not boring as that was main worry with this.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review; it really does help me to write! :)