Review for Suffocating

Suffocating

(#) PartyPoison 2011-12-22 12:28:58 PM

That was excellent. You seemed to capture and convey emotions perfectly and it’s wonderful. It’s as though not only are you showing us what the character is feeling at the moment in the story, you make the reader feel it as well. That takes some serious skills. I am at a loss when it comes to your writing. I simply do not understand how you can create such marvellous things and take what is in your mind and put them into the exact words to put the same pictures into our own minds.
Sorry, but I will not kill you.

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