Review for Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
It's 2am and I'm so happy I just wanna run around my house screaming.
I think I said that in a previous review too...
Probably still not a good idea.
Mikey (and Pete :DD) and Gerard and Frank live happily ever after :3
As for the last chapter (previous one)I totally thought Gerard was gonna flip but he collapsed into tears and I just sat there yelling PRAISE JESUS
None of this is really critiquing your writing but OH WELL I'M TOO HAPPY.
Your writing isn't crap, it's much much better than crap. It's vivid and thorough and detailed and real and I love it :]
Seriously though, your stories make up for all of the shit I read. You use DESCRIPTIVE ADJECTIVES AND ADVERBS. You don't just say dark or slow. And that makes me happy.
Oh and it's grammatically correct.
None of that is really important but AHHH.
I'M JUST SO HAPPY THAT MIKEY'S HAPPY AND LIFE IS A BEAUTIFUL THING ;u;
I'm glad that you liked the Pikey element, I've never written that pairing before and have wanted to for a loooooong time, so I hope it worked alright.
I'm really pleased that this made you happy; that's all I ever really wanted to acheive with this (even though the majority of the chapters are quite depressing).
Thank you very much for saying such nice things about my writing, it really does make me smile and wanna write!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)
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