Really great chapter! The description was amazing, along with everything else, and the tension and excitement of this story just gets better and better and grows and grows!
Gerard needs to stop thinking he knows everything and should see what Mikey ACTUALLY wants instead of guessing. They need to talk and see, or both of their sakes. Gerard's driving himself insane and Mikey's just depressed. Oh, poor him:(
oh, and if breaks Pete's face, someone (ahem, me) is going to have a fit. XD
But this was an amazing chapter :)
Author's response
Aww, thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this chapter is alright and not too dull/rushed/crappy.
Yeah, Gerard does need to just stop and actually see things, talk about things and then fix things rather than just guessing like he has been.
I'm sure that Mikey won't be too happy either if Gerard breaks Pete's face, and I doubt that Pete would just let that happen; he knows how to take care of himself. If it comes to that...
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)