Review for Perfectly Imperfect

Perfectly Imperfect

(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-02 05:52:56 PM

I don't even know what to say. Gerard is such a bad person and he doesn't think.. he really needs to. I really fucking hate him. He's just so.. misunderstanding and dubious and.. oh no. I really hope Mikey goes and finds Pete and that Mikey gets better soon. I hate seeing him in such a state. :(
I'm furious with Gerard! No, I'm fuming. Flipping my shit. Losing the plot. It's like he doesn't even THINK about what he's saying. No, he DOESN'T think about what he's saying. I can't even try to comprehend his reasoning behind it; I don't care if he just cares about Mikey, he goes about everything in the wrong way. :(

Disappointed sigh

I really loved this chapter, and it's nice to see Frank's maturity and understanding toward Mikey and Mikey's feelings. He and Pete are the only people who understand the poor kid. :(
Frank and Pete'll set things straight soon enough, I bet. Thanks for updating and this is an amazing story. I love it :)

Author's response

Gerard's lack of thought is deffinitely his downfall in this story, he needs to put some thought into what he says before he actually says it. It's nit souch that he's a bad person (in my opinion), more like he just really wants to look after Mikey and gets frustrated whenever he thinks that he's failed at that because he really does love his little brother.
Thank you very much; I'm sooooo pleased that you liked this chapter, I wasn't too sure about it so it's really nice to know that you thought that it was alright! Yeah, Frank and Pete are really the only people who get poor old Mikey in this.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

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