I'm not going to tell you your writing's flawless, or crap, because as for perfect things, I don't believe there are such things in this lifetime. Life is sloppy and full of mistakes. Especially when we're all so young. It's also a bitch. A bitch that gives you air to breathe and love to give only to snatch it away from you in, say, 60-80 years if you're lucky. xD
Mikey, don't beat yourself up. Violence is never the answer. Unless you ask someone like Pete, or Gerard, who love you both very much, but have no real idea what the hell is going on in that head of yours, then yes, for them, they can indirectly and directly hurt you and each other til the fat lady sings. And we all know for now that's not anytime soon.
I love it. If it had any mistakes or something like that my eyes are way too damaged to see any of them (I have pretty fucked up eyesight...damn genes.) Update soon. c:
Author's response
I completely agree with your first paragraph; there is deffinitely no such thing as perfect.
You're right, violence is never the answer unless you ask Pete or Gerard who will do anything to 'protect' Mikey because they really do love him, yet both need a greater understanding of what's going
on in his head.
I'm really glad that you liked this chapter and I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)