So sad. But I really really enjoyed it. I love how you put some dialogue in it which lead into a paragraph of either Frank or Gerards point of view sort of thing. Its so sweet! Keep it up. Your style of writing is so fantastic
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really happy that you liked it! I wasn't at all sure about the whole dialogue and switching POV thing, I was worried that it just seemed stupid so it's really good to know that you liked that side of things.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)