Lol This is awesome! But I kinda laughed at the end because they're doing the exact opposite of what Mikey had asked them to do. But altogether this is sad, and moving.
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm glad that you think this went alright!
I'm pleased that it made you laugh, it wasn't realy meant to but I'm glad that it did. The last little bit (Mikey's nite) was meant to be kinda ironic, so I'm glad that you picked up on that.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)