Okay,
If I were to try and put into words the emotions I felt while reading this, I would end sounding like a complete and utter idiot, so I don't think I am going to try.
Basically, I loved it.
I love how you use so many feelings and depth in all your stories, but it's never repetitive :)
I have an idea!! You see tortillachip 's review?? Well, just read that again, and you will get a rough idea of how I feel about this :)
Thanks :)
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm sooooo glad that you liked this! I was kinda worried that this sounded stupid and didn't really work, so to hear that you liked it really does mean a lot!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)