Review for All My Fault

All My Fault

(#) Brooke_Linn 2012-01-10 05:39:11 PM

I honestly cried. That was so beautiful. Poor Gerard... Poor Frankie.... Poor Mikey... THe whole thing. All of them.
That poor Frankie kid couldn’t hold it together at the funeral, just started screaming and yelling about how it’s not fair that he has to be alone again.
That broke my heart.... That was perfect. I loved the POV, i understood it immediatly. It was very unique. All around amazing job.

Author's response

I'm really sorry that it made you cry!
I'm relieved that you understood the POV changes, I was really worried that it made no sense whatsoever.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)

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