That was great! :D I loved the ending, awesome cliffhanger. Mikey and Pete are just too cute for words :3 You're such a excellent writer, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's response
Thank you sooo much; I'm really pleased that you think this was alright!
I wasn't too sure about the ending myself, it kinda felt a little rushed, so to hear that you liked it means a lot.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)