This story is so exciting and amazing and beautiful! This chapter, especially. I feel for Mikey, I really do, and I feel so bad for them both. This chapter was unbearably adorable and I just couldn't handle it at the end. It's beautiful how much they love each other and how much Mikey trusts Pete. You also write very well, which just adds to this story's amazing-ness. The suspense, though, makes me want to die. But you update frequently so I GUESS I can wait. XD
You're amazing, this story's amazing and I'm waiting. XD
..just.. don't push yourself. XD
Author's response
Thank you so very much; I'm extremely pleased that you think this story/chapter is alright! I was really worried that it was getting boring so to hear that you actually think it's exciting means a hell of a lot to me!
It really is very nice of you to say that you think I write well, to hear something like that really does make me smile.
I only update so often because I planned this all out before I wrote it, and I like to write it before I forget my ideas. If that makes any sort of sense?
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a friendly review! :)