Review for Short exerpt from Painting of a Pomegranate
Very well written however. The only problem that I could find were unclear brakes inbetween the perspectives of the person whom is with Ewen and the mother and daughter. Otherwise, kudos.
love ya back,
shunsui reminds ukitake that moonlit spring nights have their own priorities.
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