Wow. I can tell this is going to be great story! I'm definitley going to continue reading this. It's a really good storyline so far. I like how you keep Gerard in it and how he sort of seems to be haunting Frank right now. I love Mikey's character. You can by just reading this chapter he is filled with so much emotion but he doesn't seem to care whether he even exists or not. I can't wait to see more. Update when you can! :)
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you're gonna continue reading this!
You're right about Gerard haunting Frank for the moment, I'm pleased that you liked that because I wasn't too sure if it worked or not. I'm happy that you like Mikey's character, he has a lot of things going on in his head but he just doesn't care about himself or the outside world any more.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)