(#) BenRG 2006-10-21
Gah! What a place to end it Doc! Oh well, at least you guaranteed that I will be looking out for further chapters as they are written.
That aside, I do like how you do your Redo!Harry characterisation. Harry is always in a hurry, realising exactly how critical the times are and how little room for error there is in trying to fix things.
That aside, you can have too much of a good thing and I hope that you avoid the common mistake of making Harry too powerful and too all-knowing. Having him permanently one step ahead would be a little boring.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10