Review for Guardian Ghost

Guardian Ghost

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-26 02:30:15 PM

I love it!!! This is a great chapter once again. I love how much Franks words can came Mikey down like Mikey kinda trusts him but he's not sure if he should. I thought it was really good at the end with the fire alarm and how it reminded Mikey of the house fire. It was really clever!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update when you can!!! :)

Author's response

Thank you very much; I'm soooooo glad that you think this is alright!
I wanted to show that Mikey wants someone to be there for him, someone to care, and he thinks that Frank might be that person but he just isn't at all sure at the moment. At least, that's what I hope came across.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)

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