Review for I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) Tierney6661 2012-01-27 09:28:37 PM
First, I would like to help you out....
"The most wondrous thing is that the audience who shall read my stories will**KNOW***nothing of the author, therefore will be unable to judge the authenticity of the written pieces I create based on my likes, dislikes, social status and various other accommodating factors.">>>>>>>>>> Okay, I'm done trolling for now. Let's hope you finish soon as well. Good luck with the writing; I sincerely hope you make some corrections in your diction and syntax as you go on though.
P.S. If you’re a self proclaimed introvert, why are you putting shit like this out here? It's shamelessly rude, not to mention condescending. For all we know you're a little kid pretending to be a bad ass on your Mom's computer every night before bedtime. And this message of yours actually provides with a pretty good estimation of what your personality is like. As will your writing, because you did state that it will be based on your own tastes.
Also, have you ever heard of idioms? We'll see what culture you're a part of based on which ones you use and hint at. So, beside that, we'll also see which geographical areas you know more about because, of course, your stories will need to actually take place somewhere. Still thinking this was a great idea? Well, if yes, you're probably not thinking this out. Things like these don't really last too long before you get figured out, so try not to be so lofty. Have at it, V.
"The most wondrous thing is that the audience who shall read my stories will**KNOW***nothing of the author, therefore will be unable to judge the authenticity of the written pieces I create based on my likes, dislikes, social status and various other accommodating factors.">>>>>>>>>> Okay, I'm done trolling for now. Let's hope you finish soon as well. Good luck with the writing; I sincerely hope you make some corrections in your diction and syntax as you go on though.
P.S. If you’re a self proclaimed introvert, why are you putting shit like this out here? It's shamelessly rude, not to mention condescending. For all we know you're a little kid pretending to be a bad ass on your Mom's computer every night before bedtime. And this message of yours actually provides with a pretty good estimation of what your personality is like. As will your writing, because you did state that it will be based on your own tastes.
Also, have you ever heard of idioms? We'll see what culture you're a part of based on which ones you use and hint at. So, beside that, we'll also see which geographical areas you know more about because, of course, your stories will need to actually take place somewhere. Still thinking this was a great idea? Well, if yes, you're probably not thinking this out. Things like these don't really last too long before you get figured out, so try not to be so lofty. Have at it, V.
Author's response
Ah, thank you for the correction. Late night typing does not agree with my head.
As for the rest, I whole-heartedly agree. Well, with some points at least. I do have an awful way of writing sentences, which is a bad habit I've sadly had for years. I do not claim that I am a perfect writer as I know I am not.
Your points are valid, things I gave great thought before writing this. However, I feel that the website needs a little revitalization and I can only hope that I'm not the only one out there who's trying to bring the passion, mystery and love back into writing again.
-Introvert
As for the rest, I whole-heartedly agree. Well, with some points at least. I do have an awful way of writing sentences, which is a bad habit I've sadly had for years. I do not claim that I am a perfect writer as I know I am not.
Your points are valid, things I gave great thought before writing this. However, I feel that the website needs a little revitalization and I can only hope that I'm not the only one out there who's trying to bring the passion, mystery and love back into writing again.
-Introvert
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