Review for Disenchanted

Disenchanted

(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-02-03

Oh my lord this is so extremely beautiful. It's very very astounding and I love the detail that's implanted. I also love the repetition halfway through the poem; it's really effective and just spoke very strongly to me. You're a very talented writer, and this is beautiful. I have a feeling you'd be absolutely outstanding at writing lyrics.. you ever tried it?