Review for Gaze Into His Killing Jar
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-05 09:44:49 PM
SO happy to see this updated so soon again! =) You just made my night.
It's awesome how Ray and Frank knew each other before and I love how you wrote that scene. It was dark... definitely different.
Also, talking about his first kill was excellent back story as well. I wonder why Ray's dad told him not to call again? That's weird. Or maybe that's not important to the story? I just wasn't sure...
As always, I loved this update. =)
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